Dear Visa Officer,
I am writing to apply for a student visa to continue my studies at the University of [University Name]. My name is [Name] and I am originally from [home country]
I have always been interested in biology and medicine, and have a strong aptitude for scientific subjects. After completing my high school studies at High School, I decided to pursue higher education abroad. I was fortunate to be accepted into the University of [University Name] in [year], and completed a language course and an articulated foundation course before starting my degree program.
Unfortunately, my studies at the University of [University Name] did not go as well as I had hoped and I struggled with some subjects. In [year], I decided to transfer to a different university in order to continue my studies. I am now on track to complete my degree in [year], and am seeking a new student visa to allow me to complete my studies in Australia.
I have chosen to study in Australia because I believe that the country’s universities have a strong reputation for their excellent teaching and learning environments. In addition, I believe that the curriculum at Australian universities is more practical and well-rounded compared to what is offered in [home country]. I also appreciate the opportunity to experience different cultures and ideas while living in a multicultural country like Australia.
I am particularly interested in pursuing a career in biology and medicine after graduation, as I believe that the strong talent training provided by Australian universities will give me the skills and knowledge necessary to succeed in this field. I hope to find a job in [home country] upon my return to [home country], and believe that my experience studying and living in Australia will be an asset in my job search.
I am fortunate to have the financial support of my parents for my studies in Australia, and I understand and will fully comply with the conditions attached to my student visa.
Thank you for considering my application.